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*************** Nightmare **************

Story and Art by KZIRA LEE


Here is a short introduction of my future manga project.


After the Dark Impact, the world lost the existence of light and caused half of the population to diminish. It was a very dark nightmare; no one knows what caused the impact. Two centuries have passed and the world is still lying in complete darkness and chaos. The only source of light that gives hope are the fragments of light. It falls endlessly from the dark sky that stretches from horizon to horizon. This Darken world is filled with demons who hunts down every single souls and dreams. The Holy Cathedral formed an organization, where a group of gifted people who can convert fragments of light into a weapon to put an end to this endless darkness and close the gate of underworld.

Two Main Characters:

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(Character Designs by KZIRA LEE)

My name is Leo Nightmare and I’m from Old Moon city. I lost my memories at a young age; I can’t remember my childhood past. I was taken in by a man named, Adam Nightmare and his only daughter, Ophelia. My life seems to be normal but not until a demon killed my father, Adam and abducted Ophelia. I’m going to find the truth about my past and this darken world.

My name is Lilith and I’m from Night city. I have no memory of my childhood years, the only memory I have is my name, Lilith the “Mother of Darkness”. I want to know the meaning behind those words and the truth about myself.


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I really love the character design but I might still change their outfit and the story in the future. This is my manga project and I don't know when I will be able to start drawing everything ;P I still got lots of doujinshi projects to finish.


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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

OK, I'll try to start from the very beginning. Overall, the piece is great! Considering I mostly see fanart or doujin in your gallery, this definitely struck out from the others so that does it for the impact part. You always had this unique style not only in your drawings but also in coloring. I can almost immediately tell a piece made by you apart from others which is kinda hard to achieve as an artist. SO you mastered that pretty well. You can tell that there's indeed a story behind the drawing just from looking at it, it reminds me of a chapter or manga volume cover which is great considering that are supposed to be from your future manga! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> However, here's the problem which I'm pretty sure you've been told about before, as much as I like the character designs, they could use more refining as Lilith resembles a bit to Lenalee. Leo is honestly fine, but it would probably do you better to give each of them a unique feature (doesn't have to be a scar or something) that make them stand out more but still blend in somehow. I also feeling like you could've done something better with the background since it has a more 'meh' feel to it right now.
Does that make sense? <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>
Story wise, it reminds me like a mix between D.Gray and Tegami Bachi. The overall story and mood(?) you're going for is really good but, again, could use a bit more tweaking. I still very much love it all in all and I'll be waiting patiently for more about these guys ^3^